The Traveler (I Cried Upon Command)

at one point,

in the past,

i cried on command

it wasn't because

i, otherwise,

didn't care

 

rather, it was due

to a narrow lens

give to me then,

accepted wholesale

as viewing whole world

without a drop of cynicism

despite all the tears

 

not knowing, then

that whom ever it was

focusing the lens,

or editing the pen,

controlled my cheers,

globe valved my tears,

yes, i cried on command

 

but, you see,

it wasn't cause

i otherwise didn't care

 

see, one day

i happened to be on the scene

of a breaking production

later on when I got home

turned on the t/v

and saw the little fragment

they showed

versus all of what happened which I saw

 

with my own eyes

 

some of the tears i had cried

the lens commanded i dry

or have redirected

to something else that didn't

quite

even happen

in the manner reported

and it was the same story

when i opened up the paper

 

from that moment, no matter

how much they tried to tell me

to trust their eye over my own two

my eyes won out

i turned off the screen

never to be turned on again

then i lined my rabbit's hutch

with the op-ed covered newspaper pages

and fed the rabbit a little extra that day

for added emphasis

 

suddenly,

the world was bigger

i was smaller

the reasons for everything

were more complicated

and, yet,

somehow

that was far less scary

but,

perhaps,

most importantly

 

at one time,

in the past,

i cried on command

but now the flow of my cheers,

jeers and my tears

are much more in my hands

now, i cry,

upon my own command

there's so much more about which I care

that headlines twisted or never shared

 

 

 

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Editorialization

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I just edited @ 30 pages of H'Santia Aye (a Khansman Novel) this am and erased 20% of older text. Rewrite,  added chapter headings  and chapter numbers. 5 hours work.  News similar process with multiple editors it is a wonder anything non-sensational survives, like a fact. Grain of salt, but tv news is a rating's party. Pbs radio has some merit, bbc.com and aljazerra are like a room full of editors. Ending With: Something happened today. What?

"the reasons for everything were more complicated. I concur.

~A~
 


 

 

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Yes, facts don't move money (and power) like lies.

Motives drive editing. You put in your effort with a desire to optimize the quality of a book. Editors at said news* entities appear mainly motivated to optimize advertising dollars and power for the MIC, PHIC and IIC.

 

What do you think of the book, editing accomplished?