I Want To See You Smile

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Love poems

I want to see you smile, me being the reason why,
I want to hear you laugh, it brightens up the darkest of nights,
I want to hug you again, making me feel all warm and fuzzy inside,
I want to taste your lips again, hoping our hearts collide,

 

I wonder if you think the same,
Do you even remember my name?
Do you still have my picture in a frame?
Or was it all just a game?

 

I want to see your eyes sparkle, like before,
I want to hear your voice, it's the only one I adore,
I want to touch your hand and hold it forever,
I want to smell your scent again, the one I remember

 

I wonder if you think the same,
Do you even remember my name?
Do you still have my picture in a frame?
Or was it all just a game?

 

I want to feel your warmth against my skin,
I want to smell your minty breathe, it makes my head spin,
I want to hear you tell me you love me, without it being a lie,
I want to see you smile, me being the reason why.

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LostInTranslation's picture

Amazing

i love how u repeated this stanza twice:

"I wonder if you think the same,
Do you even remember my name?
Do you still have my picture in a frame?
Or was it all just a game?"

it really put emphasis on the main focus of the poem.
i love it! :)


-- Jordan <3

lovelife123's picture

Thanks :)

Thanks :)


"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein

RedAsBlood's picture

<3 it!!!

This is absolutely spectacular. I just started writing poems so I hope one day I could be as good as you!! It would make me feel amazing if you went to check out one of my poems.


A heart is like a puzzle. It's hard to put together when the pieces are broken and missing.
RedAsBlood :)

lovelife123's picture

Aww thank you :') and yeah

Aww thank you :') and yeah will do! :)


"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein

GOHIL48's picture

sounds like a romantic song

sounds like a romantic song :p great job ;)

lovelife123's picture

Haha thanks :)

Haha thanks :)


"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein

Morningglory's picture

I could hear this with music

I could hear this with music in my head. Sweet poem. :)


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lovelife123's picture

Thanks :)

Thanks :)


"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein