Me Without You ...

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Love poems

Me without you is like ...
A summer without sun,
A day without fun,
keyhole without a key,
A flower without a bee,
Asentencewithoutspaces,
Sneakers without laces,
A duck without it's quack,
A runner without a track,
A microphone without a singer,
A bee without a stinger,
I'll be with you forever,
I'll leave you, never,
I'll love you forever. <3

Author's Notes/Comments: 

A bit unsure about this one :/

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darkpool's picture

lotta fun to read, made me

lotta fun to read, made me smile.

lovelife123's picture

Aww thanks :)

Aww thanks :)


"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein

heatherburns35's picture

poem

nice writing love. A day without all these items you have mentioned would be a bad deal.

lovelife123's picture

Thank you :)

Thank you :)


"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein

SSmoothie's picture

It's cute but very cliche!

It's cute but very cliche! What matters is if you like it :) cheers SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

lovelife123's picture

I was in a mood to write and

I was in a mood to write and wrote this, i know its not my best but hey, and i dont really like any of my work lol i just write and put it up here for feedback i dont even read them back lol and thanks :)


"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein

Jesster's picture

I think it's a sweet poem

I think it's a sweet poem lovelife. Fits your name perfectly.


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lovelife123's picture

Haha thanks :)

Haha thanks :)


"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein

GOHIL48's picture

nice one :) and that

nice one :) and that ''Asentencewith.. '' was epic :D

lovelife123's picture

Haha thanks! :)

Haha thanks! :)


"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein