Departure

 

 

Our dirty palms were like soldiers

Holding flowers for our crying mothers

Cracked up, despaired

We claimed each street in
which we walked

Staggering towards a wretched future

 

The train left a little early that morning

 

I had meant to say goodbye,

with my palm against your smooth cheek
You have assumed that I did not show
with your face cold against a window

staring out at your new landscape

 

So I can only pray that these words will
make like fugitives
and run away to you
someday kissing your fingertips as
you skim a book written by a familiar name

 

I was lost in a sea of buildings and

pulled away by the sway of wind

 

Like every dream I have,
your face is moving smoke and

haunting
I am always late to catch you

and shaking
Watching the backs of trains disappear into
my chest
My arms flailing
without luck
like a drowning fool
in the sea
of time

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MonteThePoet's picture

Great poem

I'm in love with this poem great read

PS: You got a new fan!!


If your heart is not 100% in it then you're not fully committed! 

saiom's picture

beautiful

beautiful



 

 

nightlight1220's picture

Departures of those we love

Departures of those we love are like that often. But love would not be love if they weren't. Who hasn't had a loved one pass away and thought at some point afterwards, "I never had the chance to....etc etc". You have captured that essence here. As Sinatra sings..."that's life!!" Loved it. ♥♥♥


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

9inety's picture

All human growth

for the most part is the resolution of loss.

Sadness drives so much of artistic production. I guess you can say your work evokes strong emotions. Not necessarily sadness.

For me, your prose/poetry has always touched my heart deeply. Your writers hand, heart and mind has that essential beauty in the evocation, the mixed perspectives, and I say your work has the characteristic instinct of excellence.

 

Peace

Dylan


"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot

Morningglory's picture

Ugh! Loved this!

Ugh! Loved this!


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