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couldn't think of a title
As she looks in the mirror
She says to herself
"i want to change, then people will like me".
As she walks down the hall
she says a low thanks
to those who compliment her.
As she thanks them
she says to herself
"if only they really meant that".
As she lies in the dark
she's listing her flaws,
But not looking at the other side.
But as she's listing her flaws
they admire her beauty,
wishing to be just like her.
MS
i hate it when i cant think of a title
when i cant think of a title i usually just put Untitle and then if ther is another one Untiled(2) and so on. i have alot of untitles. i also leave the poem and wait a little and the go back to it and i sometimes think of one. i liked the poem it was nice. everyone has flaws and i write about mine too. i hope you get the chance to read and comment my poems. thanks for shring your work
thanks for reading, i'll make
thanks for reading, i'll make sure to read your work as soon as i can
very thought provoking.....
leaving it untitled is sometimes appropriate...It leaves it wide open, and engages the reader and encourages the use of the mind to perceive it more than just once. It could mean or be anything. It could be Broken Mirror..it could be Walk of Shame, it could be Reflection....it could be anything, and remain untitled, and have the audience do with it what they may...well done
In the words of Carver Edlund
"It's the blemishes that make her beautiful"
"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr
true words indeed :) we all
true words indeed :) we all are flawed, n i think thats what qualifies each one of us as a human being
n can i suggest "flawed" as d title? well i know basically thats what free_spirited_wolf suggested, but... :p
well, ur call. all in all a nice read :)