Running
Faster and Faster
The concrete scraping against my bare feet.
They're bleeding now, raw and bruised.
My hair is running away, behind me.
Heart pounding,
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I stop.
My hair stops.
Everything
Stops
Somewhere in the cold, icy air, I can feel your breath on me.
A cold shiver
Down my spine
One step, two step.
My legs won't work anymore.
Barely breathing
I stand still, quiet.
Eyes closed.
Your breath stops in a deafening silence.
My eyes open,
I'm all alone.
Gone.
Very involved moment you take
The reader along with you! Well done! SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Excellent work. Your other
Excellent work. Your other poems are great also