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I have been busy
But I knew the literallity
Would get serious
On the whimsical
And all hell would break loose
In the capital of beaches.
That is why I gave poetic license
To a lovely poem
By the tall girl.
If I start taking
All this writing I read
Serious
I would be on the Sun
Looking at a star
Who swears it isn't them
That I am looking at
But the other one
Over there
Who
nudges
Up to the murky Milky Way
When all I was looking at
Was the mountains
Above the valley
Until the backside of the moon
Turns around
And I can finally
Rest in Peace
( With my Dreams )
Knowing there are not any
Little green men hiding
On the darkside
Of the Moon.
KS
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I applaud the stellar imagery
I applaud the stellar imagery in the middle of the poem.
Starward
dood this is great! Those
dood this is great! Those mirrors needed to see where youre at, but they warp with time...but they all know you lookin.
I love it, yet hate the green
I love it, yet hate the green man reference at the end but still love it in a different way. It sits like a fish bone in the throat but for the effect yes for the style no. Ah conflict is good. This one will stick in my throat for a while well penned. :) hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Smoothie
That's why I got to rest in peace.
I don't think about little green men.
KS
I was happy with my thoughts before
The moon turned around. :-)
love the imagery
the sun and stars may not contain themselves
and may shy away from their grandeur
because they are humble enough to know
it is not truly theirs
Thanks lizardking
The deep thinker
You are.
KindredSpirit
Beautiful.
Dream,KS
Fill full with imagination.
drink deeply,sipping twilight
Disregard the daily grind
of treachery,disappointment
frustration, on and on.
i, too fight these mundane things.
Strike it rich,close your eyes and set your
imagination free to wander any landscape in any time ,anywhere, and alone or with anyone you choose.
Paint the world as you wish.
we all see how it really is.
your write ignited something wonderful.
xoxKoko~
Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....
Words
I Love your words
To me Koko.
I want to say more
And I will.
Sooner or later.
Xxx
KS
The little men aren't green.
The little men aren't green. I was there. They are striped black and grey. ;)
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HW
The Darkside of the Moon ?
Interesting place to be ?
Dark to Us.
For we can't see
What we can't see
On the Darkside
Of ths Moon.
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I just dawned on me the starwar's reference "the darkside of the force". Nice image to explore - POV poem. where r u? Hope all is well. - slc