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Perfection
Perfection doesn't always last.
We may wish it did,
but that's not how life works.
It's like a wick burning outside.
So luminescent,
so pure.
As life goes on,
the winds pick up,
unexpected changes occur.
Might go out,
might not.
Just Depends how strong it is.
Your
poetic theme and chain of reasoning exhibit valuable and unique spirituality. Your words possess sensation and experience without the conflict of the powerful contrary forces at work in this ever changing universe.
Peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot
Thank you
It is an honor that you took the time to read my poem. Thank you for your time it is greatly appreciated.