11 March 2005 - 3:20pm — Ashley Whittemore (not verified)
Very nice,very simple. I am glad you didn't emvellish this, and try to make it long and drawn out. Sometimes that can make it sem as though you tried too hard. You said what you had to say, and that was it. I think this well written, and flows very nicely. Nice work.
Very nice,very simple. I am glad you didn't emvellish this, and try to make it long and drawn out. Sometimes that can make it sem as though you tried too hard. You said what you had to say, and that was it. I think this well written, and flows very nicely. Nice work.