A Forthcoming Visit

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Darkness and Angst

Death will come knocking upon my door

     With a decree that only I can hear

When he crosses the threshold onto my floor

     I shall take his hand without any fear

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Ashley Whittemore's picture

Very nice,very simple. I am glad you didn't emvellish this, and try to make it long and drawn out. Sometimes that can make it sem as though you tried too hard. You said what you had to say, and that was it. I think this well written, and flows very nicely. Nice work.