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..4.. for her breath
12/09/01
she came from the north
from the cold winds that blow
from the depths of my soul
calming, freeing, warming me
grasping my heart in her breath
to never let me go though I cry out
from long lost pains and miseries
she has come to love me
and for me to love her
craving her whims and her wishes
though she says them not with her voice
i have longed for this woman
for longer than i can remember
becoming ever stronger
and now she is here
for me to love and cherish and obey
i kiss her feet with my lips
drink her wine for my life
my only wish is that she
is as happy as i am
~
This is lovely, John ... you have a sweet way with words.
John ...once again a very sensual and luring poem...."I kiss her feet with my lips" drink her wine for my life! ...very very beautifully written ...from the pen of a gifted artist ...thankyou once again, Lorraine
I only wish I had a man with such devotion as you do for your woman. Beautiful poem. Very beautiful. You have done a good job of showing your effections for this person without sounding mushy. Thanks for sharing.
John, lovely....touching my soul...you are always with me...feeling you now...my friend...love...ladycroft KF
Absolutely beautiful. There isn't much more that I can say. Just... very well done.
very nice indeed, warm, touching and erotic...
Joyce James
As always John, you touch my soul. I feel as if the poem was written for me. I feel the love, the warmth, and above all the desire. Keep up the good work. There is so much love in your heart to give, write it, tell the world. Love Doris
John this poem is very good, I enjoy great work of the mind, You have it mastered sir... Looking forward to more.. Jeanne