Konfusion With a "K"

You are cold

Covered in Gold

You wouldn't know it

Unless you were told



When given a ring

You know everything

You give me a smile

You're a little shy, and a little mean



But you are so beautiful

Something so wonderful

Something you would never know so true

When you are so forgetful

Don't forget my face



I want you to see me

As something I want to be

Something so uncovered and so true

I just want to be free



Open the door

Compliment something you wore

Give you everything

You are something to adore



I want to be everything to you

Every time that I try, I lie to you

It is not what I want to do

You just make me feel so invisable to you



Throw me a ring

Give me your hand

Let me smile at your grace

A new name and face

Something beautiful

I hate the hate of this place



You give me a new hope

For a better tomorrow

You give me a bright look

On such a dull day

If you were to turn around

I'd be totally honest and not say a thing

Cause when I see you, I don't know anything to say

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This one was just written from the heart about a lot of different things...things that I hide that only I know...I just felt like I needed to let it out.

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Christine Smith's picture

Omg...thats all i have. Even the freakin title rocks! ...btw that is my favorite song and always will be, thanx for showin me it!! but anyways, back to the poem, holy crap...that first couple lines:
You are cold
Covered in Gold
You wouldn't know it
Unless you were told
...holy crap...thats genius...i love it so much, i dont kno why but it made me go misty!! i had to blink em out and keep readin cuz i knew i'd love the whole thing! where did you think of this joel? its beautiful!