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Robbyn
Simply shy
A second look from an eye
Something to care about
Someone who loves to tell it all
She sometimes falls
But don't we all?
She gets right back up
Won't take a second look
She is everything and anything
Something in it for me
A lesson to learn
A loving friend to be
She is intreguing
Yet so unsure
If she had a sickness
She'd, herself find the cure
You are everything, everything
Get your life planned out
Don't you shout, don't you shout
You still have everything, everything
Right in front of you
I wouldn't have learned some lessons
If it wasn't for you
She is everything and anything
Something in it for me
A lesson to learn
A loving friend to be
She is intreguing
Yet so unsure
If she had a sickness
She'd, herself find the cure
Finally I am critiquing this poem. I like it. I read it when I get down. You bring me up from the bottom sometimes. I'm going to miss you at college, but we won't lose touch!