Red rose in the vase, velvet touch in quiet stillness-- the smile on your face.
Hope y'all like this little poem. The adjective "quiet" should be pronounced as one syllable, to produce the 5-7-5 syllable structure of the Japanese haiku. Notice the textural associations suggested by the images, the alliterations, & the rhymes.
glad you explained the quiet thing, cuz i woulda certainly counted it as two. enjoyed it though! thanks.
glad you explained the quiet thing, cuz i woulda certainly counted it as two. enjoyed it though! thanks.