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Abuse
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Connubial When
A hollow man threatens
his wife, "I'll never give you
that'll set you right."
The purpose of he being a man
is forever lost never to return.
Who
Should engage in
doing such a thing;
calculating again and again
How?
Much money he
has spent
for her
not taking
into account
his personal
pleasure shop visits;
in spite of having
an intelligent woman
at home.
You're quite the idealist. You do a good job of getting your point across, but perhaps you could improve on your punctuation. Generally, I like your poetry.
One of the very well written pieces of work I have seen that potray the power of a woman in so many words. Very well written and strongly depicted. A man who does not respect a woman has no existence on this earth. The more the men understand this, the better this place will be to live in. Well done. Keep up the good work.
Sh@shi
Anytime a man who is by nature the stronger of the physical two, decides to diminish himself by abusing a woman, he makes himself smaller, harder, more debased with each mean-spirited thing he says or does. This is a very good poem and an example of the things the man should have thought of before striking out at his most prized area of life. Very well said.
Jessica