Forever Lost

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Wonderful World

The rich man lost more than he earned

His riches made him lose

His peace of mind.



The pretty woman lost more than her man

Her beauty made her lose

Her honour and dignity.



The loving children lost more than their parents

Their innocence made them lose

Their voice, crying attention.



The good society lost more than their thoughts

Their negligence made them lose

Hope, in Pandora's box.



The democratic countries lost more than their leaders

Their demagogues made them lose

Through mental boundaries, intelligence.

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Sandeep  N S's picture

Let its new version be...'Forever Regained'
Let's hope together a better tomorrow.Thats only one can say.
Cos' it had to begin from each individuals Who in turn makes a society,who in turn makes state..Then a country..then our world.We all r part of everyones' misery.Each one has to realize this,and help each other,as we can.
then sure there is hope of a better tomorrow.
If one individual can realise the vices of our system(social and so on).Like u had did....thro' this work.Then why not we all can.

And i must appreciate you to constuct a beautiful poem,on some sad facts of our world.
Its a classy write.
I really enjoyed this one.

thank u for sharing
bye.

hhickson's picture

You are a dear heart. So much sadness and pessimism but so true.

Hugs and Peace


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