Awww what?
You make me wanna be more awesome!
Your towers be tripping
Not tryin to be dissin’
It just sucked because I needed some love
My day was crud
Tryin not to curse so much
The heavens lookin’ down at me from above
You probably think its lame
I ain’t tryin to play this game with God
He sees me
Trying not to let my flesh deceive me
It’s hard sometimes because I sometimes I wanna smoke weed
You see, that's the devil tryin to deceive me
The day I made a pact with the Lord
My days were never a bore
Always felt like singing
Prayer never feelin like a chore
My days have been forever changin’
For the better I would say
But others would be complainin’
But I know you’re different
We went through alotta stuff
I am ashamed for what I’ve done
But it’s already done
I’m getting past this
Through repentance
Let’s ends this
Our sexual friendship
I hope this doesn’t end our friendship
You get it?
Why I am repentin'?
Do you understand, the pain I’m in?
The Father in Heaven is lookin at me
He sees me accountable
For everyone I meet
For knowing the truth
I’m failing you
I’m failing Him
I should be encouraging you
Not deterring you
Taking you down the wrong path
Don’t worry, it’s not your fault
I am the older one at fault
More wiser
Or so I thought
I really like you
I hope this doesn’t offend you
I just wanted to remind you
“I love you”
So, please don't fight it
Just accept it
This is my Repentance
your
repentance is representative of your own salvation to be more worldly and communal, and in that mystical belief concerned with the continued survival of your individual heart and soul...
peace
Dylan
ps
great poem
you have what it takes...
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot
Sincere
You are very sincere in this poem. I like it. I would be absolutely thrilled if you would read more of my stuff and maybe leave a few comments. But anyway, the poem is great. I don't know about more wiser. You might just want to say wiser. But other than that I wouldn't change a thing. You spoke from the heart and it shows.
wow, thanks so much for your
wow, thanks so much for your comment and input! i really appreciate it <3
Matthew 7:14
The Narrow Gate