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Beautiful
Beautiful
I am just laying here,
Afraid to stir,
Afraid to move,
Not knowing what to do,
With these feelings,
Which take over mind, body and soul.
So afraid to blink,
Daring not to look left or right,
Just staring at the ceiling;
But focusing beyond it,
Where a clear picture of you lies.
I lay there hypnotized,
Mesmerized by your beauty,
Beauty possessed by no one or nothing.
Not diamonds nor pearls,
Could ever compare to you.
You are so beautiful.
very good...so much passion..i love it:)
Those are very wonderful setiements and i am sure she loved the peom you had written for her i too have wrote one simiar to this
James Darr Author of Poetry's New Leash On Life
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I know the feeling, but it took me a long time to come to it...lucky you are to know a beautiful person inside and out. Well written dont see any thing to really change...good flow.
Debbie
What a beautiful poem and idea!! Kudos to you and for you being such a great person to do that for your friend!! Just...beautiful!
this poem is so sweet I hope who ever she is enjoyed it as much as me
This is a very soothing and calming piece. Very lovely work. Very nice way to share your thoughts and feelings with another. There are a couple of wordings I might polish but that's me and this is your poetry. I didn't know this person either or experience what you experienced so if you decide it needs a little polish, then so be it, otherwise I wouldn't change a thing. Nice Piece.
Cliff
Lovely poem. The "she" you wrote this for must be special. Keep it up. Most women have such an innate low self esteem we need people like you in our lives.
Awwww thats beautiful. lol. It is really good and soo sweet. Keep writing. You've got talent.
hi & hello, this poem gets a (WIDI) WISH I'D DONE IT !
it's great thanks for sharing,i know this poem also AAA+++
L&Peace to you