Settling down and falling in
In line with the pretexts
I can't define my discomfort
I can't correct my untied expression
Turning like a globe
Spun by condition
I needed something and I was deprived
You had it and you knew it, and yet...
I've yet to recieve anything but anguish
From you who were thought so kind
And now my mood is shifting
And so is your state of mind
Ironic or conveniant?
Hard to say, and I don't want to know
Turning like a globe
Spun by condition
I will let my feelings turn
Maybe you will turn too
And if I come back to you,
I am weak
And if I stand strong in my convictions
I am still weak
I lose and I lose
But I'll live
Splendid youths
Are relative
Splintered truths
Show old abuse
So abtruse
Is this concept of life
Pretentious life
I enjoy the premise of this...but I find it very weighed down by a lot of words that just aren't necessary, a lot of perfect sounds are muddled by extra words like "and" and "it" and "the". Read this aloud and play with your line breaks a little and see what comes from it. Nice work.