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Nothing to Me
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The Wanderer You are nothing to me
Perverse and guilty
Of shame and pity
You are unwinding
Always chasing, never finding
Desires wanting, love never binding
You are a reflection
Craving a connection
Forgetting your defection
You are a piece of string
Easily broken, easy to fling
You have torn your own wings
You are concealed
Layers you have peeled
Have become your shield
You are an empty hole
Trading diamonds for coal
Who has blackened your soul
You are drowning
In a sea of flowers browning
On your way to amounting
You are lost
Look at the people you have tossed
Your quest to find yourself paid the cost
You are a prisoner
Doing anything for a listener
Your past and present you is dissimilar
You are nothing to me
Just a drop in the sea
Carrying with you, your worthless plea
I have forgotten that the shadow is me
spectacular
Just gorgeous
"Some people die at 25 but buried at 75" Benjamin Franklin
thank you so much ^_^.... I
thank you so much ^_^.... I really like your work! It's so sweet! :)
Very powerful
The rhyme and meter were executed well, and the subject itself is one that makes the reader feel loss..in a sence..
Loss of self , through the choices made in the painfull process of self discovery? Maybe its open to Interpretation....which in my opinion is great, because it means something different to each reader.
The unrecognizable reflection of current self, to past self, and the undertakings leading up to the discovery..
Regardless of interpertation, it casts its own haunting shadow over the reader.. Well done!
Wise Words
There is a lot of wisdom here. - Lady A
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thank you both very much :)
thank you both very much :)