Author Information
Fiery Crimson
Folder:
Lust, Love, & Lofty Confusion Fiery Crimson, burn through my soul,
Give me your trust, make me wHole.
Fiery Crimson, you have me under your spell.
I hAve conquered demons and monsters to drink from your well.
FieRy Crimson, I know you lust for me.
You haVe watched me for years in hopes that I would betroth thee.
Fiery Crimson, it is much too late to be aloof.
I have already stAyed and slept under your roof.
Fiery Crimson, I am your most faithful knight.
I discover treasures and bring back for you their bRight light.
Fiery Crimson, now that I am aligned with your crown,
I will be moldeD and modeled and made profound.
"...and made profound..."
I really adore that entire line - Cool device - nicely woven symbol ~allets~
^_^ Thank you very much
^_^ Thank you very much
The literary devices
used in this excellent poem keeps the reader reading....and hanging on to each line, waiting for the next to resolve the one before...and all part of an even bigger pictureof mysterious origin. The words....always makes your poetry stand out from the crowd.....and this has an enchanted feel....perhaps even tale or fable like quality to it....which is something i love very much. Excellence!!
Thank you and yes!! It was
Thank you and yes!! It was supposed to be somewhat medieval or fairy tail-ish..... me being the knight in shining armor to this royalty.... this legacy
Lovely Read
I really liked this read. By the way, this is me geeking out, but there are a bunch of letters that are miss-capitalized, and in order they happen to spell HARVARD, like the university. Might just be a coincident but yeah.........
Free Membership
Who's online
Online users
Who's new