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Enlighten Me
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Lust, Love, & Lofty Confusion Ravish Me
Show me what I have been missing
Take me to your world here and now
Teach this flower how
To bloom in concordance
To your brisance
Explore me
Hands marking me, liberating me free
From innocence and chaste
Turning me carnivorously hungry for your taste
Tongue running from my thighs to my chest
Removing my unsullied garter in complete wrest
Thrust into me
Screeching in ache and shock
Riding at the end of your stalk
Pulsating rawness render me breathless
As you fervidly take to me enrapturing wetness
Now that you have illuminated my light
Make my body burn all night
I love your use of language.
I love your use of language. You truly paint with it to mesmerizing effect. :)
thank you so very much :)!!
thank you so very much :)!!
sweat- inducing
words, searing imagery, highly erotic and masterful. Perfectly chosen delicate words set on fire with a lustful somewhat libertine invocation of emotion...The choice of word alone make this beautful, and steamy poem thrive...but the arrangement itself is what sets it ablaze. Brisance...excellent choice of word...this is an excellent poem, not for the faint of heart ..written beautifully! Outstanding!
:) thank you so much!
:) thank you so much!