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The River Running Free
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Lust, Love, & Lofty Confusion You flood my mind like a river running free.
Your words like coarse silk begin to touch me.
The brilliance of you're eyes intensify
The beat of my heart until I sigh
With the realization that we shall never be
That river running free.
Your stride washes in like a tide,
Strong and powerful and never to abide
By the ocean's archetype to comply
Which only testifies to the smile that vivifies
The hope that one day, maybe
Our rivers will run free.
Amazing
Amazing- beautifully written, you have a way with words! keep writing :) ~Maya
*tallsquirrelgirl* she feels in italics and thinks in CAPITALS ~henry james
thank you so much! i really
thank you so much! i really appreciate that :)!!!
Great write this poem,
Great write this poem, you write very well and have produced a marvellous poem. The poem is a good read and is full of emotion and hope for the future. Good luck both.
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Thank you so much for your
Thank you so much for your kind words.... i love reading your work!
powerful
The first stanza is epic..and intensifies a feeling of desire. I really like this poem for 2 reasons. The feeling of that desire, but conversely the despair in realizing it may not ever be. Excellent poem,and excellent usage to accompany the lines. Bravo
Thank you very much. :) I
Thank you very much. :) I wrote this for someone who is moving really far away. This particular guy just had a tough life, but he always managed to carry with him this smile and optimism and strength and ability to never give up on his dreams despite his circumstances. So, despite the poem being about a sort of love, it is also about our hopes and dreams for the future individualy.