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Again, we have this interesting thread of entropy---never parading itself, always in a subtle position as a process (usually with verbs ending in "ing").  Your understanding of entropy, both in its local form during ordinary lifetimes, and in the implication of the ontological or eschatological extreme, is, in my experience, unusual for someone still in the full flower of youth and adolescence.  I do not look down on your age, not at all.  I look up to it, because I did not have nearly the innate wisdom that you obviously have; and you not only have it, you deploy it in your poems.  About the thread though, I like the aspect is indicates of your ability to control and shape your material in such a subtle way.  The mastery of that, which I believe you will possess, is well demonstrated in Stevens' work.  Long thought of as a "miscellaneous" poet in the 30's and 40's, in his final years, readers and scholars alike were beginning to notice the interior references and connections between the various poems.  You are starting that way earlier than he did . . . and please do not stop.  Stevens said poems could occur, but they would be better off being caused (that is, planned).  Your deployment of the internal connectors, demonstrated by the entropic themes in several of your poems, gets top marks.