Tinsel tots toppled by the thought of teeming treasures
All ardent attention attracted to an aching anticipation
Mother marches to make munchkins' merry minds motionless
As father faithfully fastens fleece upon their feet
Gleaming gazes grappling to greaten grow to a glint grain
The shavers soundly sleep in the shanty safeguarded by sentimental sanctity
As parents perseveringly push to provide plentiful presents on pittance
Whistling winsomely while wearingly working for a worthy winter windfall
Revisitng this again, I am
Revisitng this again, I am even more moved. Like all excellent poets, your work becomes greater with each subsequent reading.
Starward
^_^ Thank you so much. I'm
^_^ Thank you so much. I'm very flattered. :)
I do not have the talent to
I do not have the talent to write in this way, except when it happens strictly (and all too rarely) by chance, and I applaud anyone who can. This is another reason you remind me of the Welsh poets/bards, and not of the Latinate English and American poets I have mostly studied.
Starward
Thank you very much :)
Thank you very much :)
:)
Fun to read. Thanks for sharing
thank you for reading :)
thank you for reading :)
candid
Great gobbs of greesy grimy gopher guts!...sorry, i couldn;t resist a comparable reply.
"Deepinyourdreams"
hahah thank you ^_^
hahah thanks ^_^
I Had To Read It 3 x
To capture the fullness of the telling - Meaning and emotion filled achievement. - Stella
I am honored; thank you very
I am honored; thank you very much. ^_^
It was inspired by my mother, a single mom, and everything she did and tried to provide me with especially during Christmas.