he suggested I dive deep into the ocean

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How could I not accept

The knife's version?

His story trick

Was seen as an unfolding.

This was not in my controls.

Though it was agreed to see

The spots in the sun's glass.

I tried to choose a different path

Than the one I'd lived in my darkened past.

He willed it to become

When his knife had slashed.

 

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The knife's version

My knife I refer to as the snake's version.  I never saw him as a snake until it was pointed out to me. His vision or version of the story tends to cut deep even after its been agreed.  I like this. I can interpet for my own needs.

Thank you 

Debbie