Should I be grateful or hateful

They had watched

with permission

once forgotten

 

They watched

for the sake

of inspiration

 

they took

from my soul

my pieces

 

proof of us

became deleted

 

how could I know?

i was under a spell

 

i didn't know

they'd send me to hell

 

but I survived

and came back to life

 

with understandings

mixed up with lies

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

It's a long story. I vote for grateful

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I love this like I love

I love this like I love chocolate and various other foods that I like:)

Good job


We awaken everyday to hope filled with haze

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Glad to be of service.  To be

Glad to be of service. 

To be right up there with chocolate... :)


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Yes

Yes yes

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Thanks

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VIVIDLY EXPRESSED

You have said so much here. I wish that you find the peace, love and happiness you have missed. Your "return from Hell" -- may it be a cause of finding joy in this world and Paradise in the Hereafter. Well written and vividly expressed.


Muhammad Naveed Ahmed.

Pen name:Emmenay.

Yahoo email ID:Ambitious7

Initials: M.N. Ahmed.

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Thank you sooo much, Emmenay!

Thank you sooo much, Emmenay! i appreciate your blessing!! :)


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Like This One

Great write enjoyed ~Stella~

 


 

 

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Thanks, lady A! 

Thanks, lady A! 


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