The Bus

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Military/Patriotic

He climbed on the bus

With the rest of us.

He may have had a few

And he started to stew.

He started to bawl

As he told it all

About a rocket attack

That exploded behind his back.

His friend in the body bag

Was just a pair of shredded dog tags.

He had been standing where the rocket fell,

Blowing his body all to hell.

“I survived I know not why

I lived and he had to die.

Or did I?”



His buddy walked up to calm him down,

Yet he carried on, til his buddy knocked him out.

In those few minutes I understood and swore,

To always honor the men and women of that war.

They gave more than they should have had to

And are still giving, the brave and the few.

I understand the cost of that wall

But what is not written there, are those that didn’t fall.

These are the ones still paying each day,

Collateral damage so to say.

To these unfallen warriors and heros

Who carry this war with them daily in their night throes

Thank you and God bless,

Lay down your burden and I pray God give you rest.



The bus finally reached the base

We all climbed off with a little war taste.

The bus driver said he wouldn't report him and his mate

If they had the bus cleaned up by eight.

I walked to my room and said a prayer,

God let these men know, that we still care.

The next morning was a new day,

We got back on the bus and went our way.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

For Teddy and all the men that came back, but never left.

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jgupta's picture

The more I read your war poems the more you convince the futility of war in our today's world. We really have no enemies except for our greed which make us buy sell war and weapons.

TREXPATTON's picture

Sometimes I think all of us from 'Nam are alone, here. Then I see a piece like this, and my self-worth improves. Thanks, Huck. But it's still a jungle. Thanks. Rex.


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but I'll be famous, b'ye and b'ye !

Bianca Boonstra's picture

Well written. Must have been terrible for these men to relive this nightmare over and over again...