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A POEM IN THE SAND
Hand in hand we walked along the beautiful beach.
The day was just wonderful like the taste of a sweet peach.
I love you with all my heart, love your eyes of blue
I promise to love you, my love for you is true.
As we walked I felt that I was off in some dreamland
you pulled me to you side and I saw a poem in the sand.
My heart just leaps with pride to know you cared that much
to write to me your words of love, pride and such.
There it was written in the sand for the whole world to see
just what you thought of our life and how much you love me.
You are the only man that I care to spend the rest of my life with
thank GOD we now all know, true love is no longer a myth.
Beautiful, romantic, shimmering with love. It's amazing what love can do when it's pure and felt on both sides. It gives me faith that maybe love and happily ever afters do exist. Thanks for bringing up my spirits.
although poems
in sand
don't last..
may your love for
each other be carved in stone
(wipes eye) Grrrrrrrrrrr........ It ws good. Very, vey good. I hope I find that one day. You seem to deserve it though. So I'm happy for you. :-)
Dani
Passionetepoet
beautiful poem, written from an honest heart. sometimes i think our lives are just poems in the sand... waiting on the waves. eric
a beautiful love poem..
This is a beautiful poem and a good collaboration as always, Deborah
From your comments I take it this is a poem from the title game you play. You did it well! :)
a very romantic piece of work!!
This is a really beautiful poem! I got a little lost in it...in a good way that is! Once again, you are an excellent poet! Keep up the awesome work!
I don't think true love ever was a myth but just something that's so hard to capture. You write like a real sweetherat here and your words are saturated with love as they flow easily across the page. I found this to be very enjoyable as it evoked the emotion of love from my heart into my soul......good writing. I love honest heartfelt writing like this....Eric
People don't run out of dreams they just run out of time.
Hi Renee What a wonderful tribute to a lover. Such heartfelt words are caught with this piece. I hope he treasures this forever. I enjoyed the read and as always in awe of your talent..... You go girl...keep up the good work! Cya and have a great day :) Roz
Very nicely done. You have painted a very beautiful picture with your words. This was quite a tribute to the one you love.
This was very beautiful... A very well-written poem, Renee' I liked it much :) I especially like "There it was written in the sand for the whole world to see, Just what you thought of our life, and how much you love me" Lovely.
Awwww, that poem is so sweet! I bet I know who it is all about! :) I bet Bob loved it very much!! Really, really nice. This is one you've got to go shopping for--I mean, you've got to get the PERFECT frame to frame this one in...I think it's just that good! A true love poem!
sweet words , and a beautiful image .The latter is my favourite, and I could through those words see it, thanks for this nice poem.
oh so beautiful.....wow!!! No matter who came up with the title the thoughts and heartfelt words are yours.... Hail to the Queen!!!
A KILLER I THINK THERE'S NO END AND PRACTICE MAKES PERFECT RENEE' YOU DON'T FROG AROUND !lol
What a beautiful tribute to love & the lover. I hope that he will always cherish it... Beautifully written. Amy
Gentle is the night♥