Timeless (012)

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1uZNG5QdqH4jmBcQD9-JTgV046y5-ulAp/view?u...

The above is a link to an audio file in my google drive, hopefully it works


 

Unburdened by time 

What's a second?

What's a month?

What's our life?

How sublime

 

My time with you felt

Not sped up, nor slow

Not feeling exactly

Correct though

Time with you

Feels timeless

 

No face

To face 

No hands

To handle

Nothing wasted 

Nor both-ends

Burning of the candle

 

Time to pursue

Never rushed 

Never dallied

Plans to hang

Never hung 

Just rallied

 

Unfettered

We flit

Feeling free from 

Father Time

Greeted us gayly

Granting gifts

To gather 

At our prime

 

Time with you 

Feels timeless

Indeed

Time with you 

Is blissfully

Freed

From

Time

 

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Author's Notes/Comments: 

There is audio for this that I feel prudent to listen to alongside the written word. 

I don't know how, if such an option exists, to upload that audio file to this posting though 

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Teytonon's picture

I loved this!..

I loved this! Simple, yet profound.

Says so much using so few words.

Thank you for sharing it.

h1s4k0's picture

Audio Linked

Could you give the audio link a try?

If it works and you give it a listen, do let me know how your opinion shifted of the piece (if at all)

 

Graciously,

H

Teytonon's picture

Hi. I tried the audio link..

Hi. I tried the audio link, it worked fine, no problem. In my opinion, the audio didn't add or detract anything from the words on the page. They stand on their own as good writing. Have a great day.