https://drive.google.com/file/d/1uZNG5QdqH4jmBcQD9-JTgV046y5-ulAp/view?u...
The above is a link to an audio file in my google drive, hopefully it works
Unburdened by time
What's a second?
What's a month?
What's our life?
How sublime
My time with you felt
Not sped up, nor slow
Not feeling exactly
Correct though
Time with you
Feels timeless
No face
To face
No hands
To handle
Nothing wasted
Nor both-ends
Burning of the candle
Time to pursue
Never rushed
Never dallied
Plans to hang
Never hung
Just rallied
Unfettered
We flit
Feeling free from
Father Time
Greeted us gayly
Granting gifts
To gather
At our prime
Time with you
Feels timeless
Indeed
Time with you
Is blissfully
Freed
From
Time
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I loved this!..
I loved this! Simple, yet profound.
Says so much using so few words.
Thank you for sharing it.
Audio Linked
Could you give the audio link a try?
If it works and you give it a listen, do let me know how your opinion shifted of the piece (if at all)
Graciously,
H
Hi. I tried the audio link..
Hi. I tried the audio link, it worked fine, no problem. In my opinion, the audio didn't add or detract anything from the words on the page. They stand on their own as good writing. Have a great day.