you really loved me

Laying there motionless

red all around

sharpe knife off to the side

last thought in my mind is

if you will be ok

as everything begins to fade

i see a blue and white light

i pray it is death

but as it comes closer

i see it is you

wait...your an angel

i cant believe

i wont believe

as you say

i am your angel

your gardian angel

you hold your hand out

hoping i will take it

but i dont

you question me why

i say i wanna die

theres nothing to live for

you reply there is you just dont see

see what i ask

see you happy while i cry

see you smile while i frown

love you say

how can u say love if you yourself does not believe it love

i loved you

you never loved me

and just as you lean into kiss me

i disappear and you realize how much i ment to you

when its to late to admit

you realize you really loved me

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Afzal Shauq's picture

very sweet and professionally done this poem... sure I am not wrong if I say you are good poet with new subjects to express... hope you will like my expression of love based peace thoughts too