-Hated Fate-
I swore it wouldn’t happen like before.
I swore I’d never again feel this undying sore.
I feel it more deep in my core.
My pain shall always remain.
Just when life seemed so plain.
And now things have grown insane.
It shall never leave, and I shall only greave.
This is my fate.
It shall ever constipate.
I long to set a new date.
I want to recreate,
But maybe it’s too late.
My fate is sealed.
Like a crate.
The last of it’s kind.
Looking for a mate.
But the die is cast.
Life moves so fast.
Will there ever at last
Be a relief from this god forsaken past?
-Exkai Jade Satiro-
well done..I have the same Idea, I dont believe in fate but in struggle as you did in this poem..rich idea with impressive way you did it... perfectly ... and appreciate it