Blissful Sacrifice

Set the fires higher-
The golden embers are sediments of desire.
A ritual for adoration-
Chants that I scream without hesitation.
An altar that hosts your image-
Perfection, no deception. 
But your diction and conviction-
Often detriments.
Keep still while I fill,
This chamber with reminders.
Sweet love, you're confused.
I'm your muse despite your bruises-
No need to stir, this sacrifice is suffice.
You'll sleep still in silk,
I've ladled out the sins- 

You're distilled.

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Interesting Use of Rhyme

and slant rhymes are wonderfully composed and placed. It will be interesting to watch the evolution of such stylistic flourishes ~slc~
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Onyamaichi