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its you.
What can i do to make you stay?
i needed you most when you werent here today
in a world of sideways living
you'll find few that are forgiving
but if you'll stay i'll be one
and if you dont i think my life will be done
my life revolves slowly
around what youre doing
i live jsut for you and the feelings im having.
youa nd i may be meant to be,
but its you whos blinded and cannot see.
i try to love you, i swear i do.
bu whats worng with my feelings?
i think its you.
your poem was one of the most inspirational things i've read in awhile. I like your style, unlike some writers you have a way of explaining things like this without coming off as really angry, more disappointed i'd say. anyway, good work, if you get a chance check out some of my stuff, it's mostly crap,but i like it, maybe you will too...