In Your Silence

This is designed to be a rock song with the verses flowing very fast but the

chorus slowing down to make the point of the song.

I don't know why I like a little mystery in my songs but I like the reader/listener

to paint a picture in their own mind. I guess I'm stuck in the 70's rock scene yet

I'm writing country now.



                    vs 1

                    Here she comes a toast to dame Cover Girl

                    a lust for cameras leaks through her stare.

                    She'll pierce your heart and soul like an arrow

                    she'll mix her magic into a snare.



                    Chorus:

                    She'll knock on love's door

                    and when she stuns you you're sore

                    her looks are inviting

                    But you've been hurt and the pain

                    keeps you hiding in vain

                    in your silence.



                    Bridge:

                    And she'll sit near your corner in a low cut dress

                    She's got legs for miles and your mind's in a mess

                    She smokes long cigarettes and blows out a kiss.

                    She's got the look of the moon through an angel's mist



                    vs 2

                    Here she comes with her finest face for a tumble

                    a host of beauty seculuding beware.

                    She'll spread her smiles and wait til you stumble,

                    she'll host your pride hoping you're unaware.



                    Chorus:

                    She'll knock on love's door

                    and when she stuns you you're sore

                    her looks are inviting.

                    But you've been hurt and the pain

                    keeps you hiding in vain

                    in your silence.

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Kristine Snow's picture

What a contrast to Moon Running....almost the opposite...but I like the feelings you portray in both of them... Kris