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Get out of my face!
Get out of my face, quit asking me why?
I'm trying my hardest not to cry.
Get out of my face, give me some space,
quit trying to chase after me.
Just let me breath.
I'm getting angry, tears are falling,
I asked you nicely, now I'm crying.
My fists are balling, and your getting to close,
you need to move out of my face,
or I'm going to force you away.
I don't want to hurt you, I really don't.
So please get out of my face.
Before I loose all self control,
and let my anger out on all of ya'll.
I like it!
Don't listen to what others say! I think this was just fine! It wasn't as emotional as the rest of your poems, but it is still a nice poem!
<3
:S Not one of your better
:S Not one of your better ones, I'm only saying this as constructive but it feels forced.. A lot of emotion here, blocking your creativity or clouding it so you choke out the words... I say this because this is what I see and I've done it before many times, our emotions are powerful don't worry if you decide to redit this one in a more center frame of mind you will create a beautiful work of art here... Poetry is afterall about emotions.
I know. I wrote it right
I know. I wrote it right after I stopped crying. So I wouldn't let the class see my red eyes. It was forced. I needed something to do. So I wrote. It will be re done, later on. And it's fine , I want honest critics, not living ones. :) much appreciated,and I'd expect nothing less from you. Lol.
-Elfy*