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Passing By
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Sad People passing by
People getting married
People getting children
I sit here watching them everyday
Feels like time stands still for me
While everyone else move on in life
Is this the right place for me?
Should I even be alive?
Everytime a woman give birth
Everytime a couple get married
I get sad
Cause I'm not a part of it
I know this feeling very well!
I can feel your sadness from this poem. Don't worry, your time will come :-) I noticed three grammatical errors: 'move' instead of 'moves, 'give' instead of 'gives' and 'get' instead of 'gets'. I like the last line, the way it stands alone and is apart from the rest of the poem. The way it is on its own underlines the sentiment expressed in that last line - 'not a part of it'. A simple and honest poem! And it is its simplicity and honesty that makes it powerful. Good job!
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My deepest apologies for the
My deepest apologies for the grammatical errors in my text, will try to be more careful next time and again, thank you so much for your comment :)