A Kiss
I want a kiss from you lover.
Not a wimpy kiss were my cheek barely feels
your lips as they lightly brush past with that
hurried feeling of duty, no passion.
Not a kiss like I might expect from my grandmother,
all soft lips moistly pressed to my face.
And not a kiss that you might get from a child,
all chocolate and sweet, sticky love.
The kind of kiss I want from you would
start with a caress, I feel your fingers in my hair,
then drawing my face toward you. Your lips take
mine, tasting gently at first, asking, and receiving
a shared passion. But a kiss is not just lips reaching
for each other, it is the taste of you I want, the feel,
your beard scratching my skin as you wander to my neck.
A kiss is your body pressed so close to mine, there is
no beginning or end to us, only the love we feel for
one another, and finally it is our children making fun
of us and you and I ignoring them and smiling at each other
as we continue to hold on, unwilling to let each other go,
for this kiss to end.
I loved the poem.I also was challenged by the same subject matter.Feel free too see!One thing though,I think the poem would be even better had you not incorperated the family deal at the end.Maybe I'm wrong,either way,I loved the poem.
damn now that was a kiss you have deifnitly risen to the challenge
WOW!!! Now that's a kiss! hehehe... I saw this on the message board and had to come find it here so I could comment. Beautiful poem Dragon Greeneyes! Can't wait to see what you write about for the next challenge (the message board is so fun) Nancy