Early morning,
The smell of autumn fills the air.
A light frost has covered the ground,
And it is silent as only that time
Of the day can be.
A soft breeze rustles the multicolored leaves,
Shaking some loose to float
Lazily to the earth below.
One falls onto her skin,
Perfect and white in its stillness,
Frost glitters like diamond dust
Upon her eye lashes
Eyes, wide open and staring into the sky,
Unseeing
If you look deep enough into those eyes
You may see,
Just a glimmer of something,
And you ask yourself
If it might be the image of her last thoughts
Before life left her
To lay so perfect in her stillness,
As she never did in life.
beautiful
this is just a wonderfully written poem... and it is slient as only that time of day can be. boy I love that time of day... you have done well with this piece and I have enjoyed reading it very much.... you have true talent... thank you for sharing this piece with us... Renee'
Beautiful, just beautiful! Not more I can say, love your wording!!
nice passage... "If you look deep enough into those eyes, you may see, just a glimmer of something," Lyrical...beguiling.
"Frost glitters like diamond dust" A very beautiful line in a very beautifully written poem. I enjoy your work. Thanks for sharing this one.