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Short Verse #2
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My Quotes / Short Verses "I will take your soul, grinning while I drag you below.
Don't think your mine?, Do not worry you will know in time.
oh child of sin, fallen from god fallen from hope
oh puppet of lies, bow before me as everything dies.
I am the demon you serve, and where I reside
in each and everyone of you is where I hide."
This is amazing lol. Its
This is amazing lol. Its short, but it really grabs ahold you, i wish it was long. But still good neverless.
And its true in a sense, there is a demon inside of all of us, its what makes us do, the evil things. lol.
We all tend to fall from the sky at times, cause being good, isnt good all the time . XD
I love it though. :)
-Elfy*
Now that one is just
Now that one is just intense... gives me the hibby-da-begeebees lol
I happen to have an amazing imagination and the visuals this stirred up were quite vivid..it gave me chills! This one is quite hard to chose a line but I definately like "Oh puppet of lies, bow before me as everything dies. I am the demon you serve, and where I reside, in each and everyone of you is where I hide." wow.. great work.. AGAIN ;)
:) again thank you, love
:) again thank you, love hearing feedback on my writing positive or negative!!
so I should think this was a mission accomplished in touching someone's imagination and emtions? :)