'Rendezvous with an Angel'

A hideous holy devil, once came my way
Threatened to take it all away
Could send a shiver down any spine
But sought to make me come down the line.

Darkness scared me to chills, until he drove me into it
Ensuring to snuff the faintest light,
I was smothered with black, no choice but to abide
Asphyxiating of white, I cried as I pried
Malicious, many would say; but did he empathize at my plight?

I had a princess to adore and love
Talk of her touch, then the softness of dove
He stole my beloved and rode and rode
Till her moans cursed me with a contemptuous ode.

Wrapped in his wrath when I suffered pain
Deep in anguish, I wondered, did I endure it all in vain?
Chained and tortured, I was fed on some pills
On the saturation, I barked “Let me be on my will!”

The pill made me sustain, appearing all eased
Deep beneath, I knew was diseased
Took it for the fact - he will leave me deceased
Powerless though, my underlying craved to get him pleased.

Stuck in the dungeon, struggling to sway
Hopeless I was, but wanted a fray
Then came a power to carve a way
With a blinding sparkle, I was put down astray.

The glimmer subdued, I got some vision
Astounded to be surrounded by my own reflection
Thus, from an ordeal I was granted an exemption
I couldn’t help feel gratified to undergo this redemption.

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leeblue's picture

love it, interesting, was

love it, interesting, was trapped as well by your poem.


lee

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Hey!! thanx a lot ))

Hey!! thanx a lot ))

word_man's picture

it is verry well

it is verry well written,flows nicely easy to read
the meaning is vague but thats allright that leaves the reader to speckulate
a story, or a real feeling leads me to beleive god is dealing with you some what
great job

ron


ron parrish

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thanx pal!!

thanx pal!!