Nuances: Rubble, Stubble, Trouble; Earth

From wheels and fire to
rockets and atomic bombs,
their species worked hard
too hard, really; had to be
eliminated . . . wholly.

 

Kyakuchuu

[jlc]

Author's Notes/Comments: 

An old and persistent theme in science fiction.  I simply wanted to restate it within the confines of the Tanka form,

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lyrycsyntyme's picture

I'm trying to imagine Rod

I'm trying to imagine Rod Sterlings voice reading this : )

J4nu4r14n's picture

your comment on my rubble stubble poem

I consider the Serling reference to be one of the finest compliments I have ever received.  Thank you!


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This is excellent! Very good

This is excellent! Very good work.