Ditching!!

When I was in the 5th grade,

I didn?t understand why people would leave me behind!

They treated me as a nerd,

And a loser with no future!



But now I understand what they were doing,

They were ditching me,

Because they didn?t like me.



But now I?m a special girl,

That is loved by God,

And at least wanted by Him!



But now people ditch me,

Even my closest friends.

They don?t care what they do,

They don?t understand what I go through.



They make you feel like a no body,

Or a loser.

I guess if they can?t except you,

Then no one can!

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This poem is dedicated to all the losers that made me feel like a loser when I was young, and the people that treated me so wrong, but at least someday they will get it back!  But I will go on like nothing ever happened, thanks for reading, PLZ critique!!!

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Alicia Batchelder's picture

This poem really touched my heart. Up until a few months ago, I let my friends ditch me all the time. Now I have new friends who respect me and include me and they have taught me that I am special and that I don't deserve to be ditched. Good work! Alicia