Plunging into the pits of hell -
grasping my mortal fate.
Life's final breaths,
drawn with dreadful fear.
Absent are angels,
with no gods to save me.
Last thoughts despaired -
demons controlling my mind.
In the darkened hold,
death is already here.
Drapings of shadows -
new sun to never rise.
Tomorrows just end -
another linger for tears.
All follow till slumber -
to the hereafter I fall….
© C.E.Vance
Your FB friends are lucky... Whimsical writes of yours are GOOD
Your FB friends are lucky... Whimsical writes of yours are GOOD to read My Friend in-wards
©bishu
Thank you, Bishu. I consider
Thank you, Bishu. I consider writes like this to be quick and easy, lacking appeal to me. However, some of my readers seem to enjoy them, so perhaps I'll use this style a bit more often.
What It Is
"...Absent are angels, with no gods to save me..." heartfelt lines, a definition of despair, the image sinks deeply to times when that was true and thankfully a time long past - you hit a chord with a handful of just the right words, Less is so much more - Lady A
Thank you, Lady A… Words
Thank you, Lady A… Words never rang more true - than these. I've lived them a million times - I suppose it's one of the things that makes me the person I am.