She lingered over her martini, an olive
floating gracefully in the gin,
vermouth and humor sitting dry on her tongue.
The summer evening slowly inched itself across the tablecloth
until the light from the candle at the center
hindered its crusade to bring on the dark.
I ran my hand over the flame, letting it lick the dent of my palm,
inching it further down until
the quick pain reminded me of that first pinprick of love
the night we met. Do you remember
the earthy smell of the apples slowly rotting under the leaves?
The world altering itself beneath our feet?
There was a sense of urgency back then, a need
for hastened fingertips and my lips to always be pressed to yours,
skin rubbed in raw emotion until it burned like kindling
in the night. Your eyes were golden
under the lanterns, your hands pale birds
swooping over your plate.
In that moment my skin burned for the ocean
of your curls across my hips,
the charm on your necklace to brush against my thigh,
the warmth of summer waves to pulse beneath my skin.
This poem is exquisely
This poem is exquisely beautiful. Your command of imagery, metaphor and simile set a very high example for and to all of us who write poetry, and your work could certainly instruct those who need to undertand the varied forms of real poetry.
Starward
You're making me blush lol
You're making me blush lol
C.Locke
Glad to do so, because the
Glad to do so, because the accuracy of my words is verified by a reading of the poem. I wish I had seen this poem, or something like it, forty-five years ago when I first began to experience those preliminary urges toward poetry.
Starward