is it yourself or others

Did you ever look into some ones eyes?

Did you ever feel the pain someone else was feeling?



Could you ever tell the diferences apart from sad and happy?

Could you ever cry with someone?

Or do you cry for only yourself?



Could you make someone smile with a drop of a pin?

Or do you only make them cry with a drop of pin?



Do you only care for yourself?

And noybody else



If i asked would you let me forgive you?

Then if i forgived you

Would you forgive me back?



Would you let me live my life?

With out me looking over my back?



Would you tell me why you hurt me so bad?



Could you fix the mess you put me in?



You think your in a mess

You see i cant get out of mine

I'm stuck in it untill you stop

and look around yourself

Try to realise your hurting other people

untill you realize that pain goes two derections

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wow...............this poem makes me speachless................its makes me think of alot of things like when we were best friends i use to love the dumb things we did together.......like walking down the road at 2 am when our perants thought we were at the movies lol..........good times crystal good times