Home

A hug







All I need is a hug

It can be small

Just one to stop the pain

One to tell me that I’m loved

One to knock these pills out of my hand

One to show me what is right



I hug a teddy bear

This is the only thing that loves me

I cry on his head

My tears run down his ears

Hes all wet

I wish teddy bears were real

I would get a hug from it every day

Unless it could walk away

Like everyone else does

Author's Notes/Comments: 

i wrote this last year in my diary. i felt so alone. that night.

View brokenalive's Full Portfolio
  • Login to post comments
  • 167 reads

last updated 11 October 2010 - 4:26am
©20 August 2003 - 10:08pm — brokenalive
21 August 2003 - 12:20am — Alicia P. (not verified)
Alicia P.'s picture

This poem is beautiful. I believe that a lot of people can relate to the content of this poem. This poem is filled with emotion and it is really good. Keep it up.

11 December 2003 - 1:26am — nancylangley
nancylangley's picture

If what you need is a hug and to know that you are loved, Then I send you a GREAT BIG HUG, and I want to tell you that I LOVE YOU, in a friends way, I don't know you, but I just know that everyone deserves to be wanted and deserves to be shown that they are wanted, So you have many friends in this world, the only thing is that you dont know you have them..!!!.. May God Be With YOu..!!..

NANCY LANGLEY