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So i cry

  Sitting here

Tears run from my eyes

Thoughts of sucide run threw my mind

Its weird noone knows my thoughts

    Noone but me

So i well cry

So these tears run from my eyes

And these thoughts of suicide well run threw my head.

Maybe i'll die of

  An over dose

   or die of lead poision

    Or die of a heart atack

Can you take the part of stoping me

Can you take the part of stoping someone else

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writin canada day..... if you dont know me then you wont understand any of my poems

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 4:26am
©4 July 2002 - 3:37am — brokenalive
4 December 2003 - 9:57pm — carla (not verified)
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hey i like this poem but i have somthing to tell you sucide sux its not somthing you should think about my friend did even though we wernt talking as much as usally only in school but we was best friends and it hurt so just think about the people in your life hun and i will be back on

11 December 2003 - 1:47am — nancylangley
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Well I don't know you personally, but I do think your poems are telling alot about your life, and I am sorry that you are suffering so much, I suffer as well, with problems in my life, I think that is why I can relate to your poems..... Good Luck In Your Fututre In Your Life!!!!!!!!

NANCY LANGLEY