The process of up Growing up without a Father

Cold nights, stary skies
Tears flow with unanswered cries
It hurts to watch everyone else
through there daddys eyes when mine is gone

I am lost in the process of growing up
beacuse I want to be daddys little girl

He left with no answers
Not even a hi or goodbye
Mommas love was a lot
but nothing can fill the love of a Father

I am lost in the process of growing up
because I am left in the pass

LUllabys and music notes can take away my pain
but not forevermore, not eternally because thats
what growing up without a father dose.
Everthing sooths the pain for a little
but when Im alone the tears start to flow

I am lost in the process of growing up
beacuse I am alone

I think about all the things that you will miss out on
and all the things that I have missed out on
because you walked out the door
BUt I relize that everything is going to be okay
because I am not alone
I am not in the pass
and I may not be daddys little girl but
I am mommys little girl and
shes helping me threw
the process of growing up

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wrote this poem to get my feelings out, about how it was growing up without a father.

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I can feel the raw emotion

I can feel the raw emotion you have behind these words, and I can almost see you struggling to find the right words for this piece. Don't ever stop writing and I would encourage you to challange yourself even more, it will greatly improve your talents :) I loved this piece!


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