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Part 3 - Momentous Hug (Tanka)

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Tanka {Poems}

Watching you leave now

A sadness erupts from me

I don't want regrets

I chase the wind to hug you

And say "take care" in the heart

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Read the Tanka "Coincidence."  You'll understand.

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 3:59am
©29 January 2007 - 4:28am — bluewave
29 January 2007 - 4:09pm — Ruth Lovejoy (not verified)
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this is very touching..