Blue Flower .. Do you remember?
What was you before, in ignorance of a life of perversity, lies and hatred.
Already too much on your small shoulders ..
As already injured, wilted.
Broken childhood,unforgettable..
You know it, Blue Flower...
You so tried to protect yourself without understanding why,
you were not ready to live that much ..
You chose to protect your loved ones at the expense of your life.
Admirable!
But this gaping hole in the center of your chest
still hurts ..
Blue flower, you felt..
Almost destroying all of your petals..
The water you drank poisoned your mind.
The air you breathe burned your roots.
You do know .. How toxic is the world of darkness ..
So difficult to find the light..
It took years to get over.
Rage, grief, invaded your life and your dreams.
Choose to move into deep iced water hopping for
find a place in the sun.
You barely knew to swim .. But you were determined..
It saved Your life !
Now cured, bloomed !
stronger, more beautiful!
More mature and stronger than ever !!
Blue flower, you had the strength to battle.
You made me what I am to this day.
I cannot thank you enough for that sacrifice.
I've Broke you, Destroyed you ..
'' What that time was..
Forgiving.. Is the only thing i can say..
because I chose to live in the sun.
Blue Flower .. never forget is the promise I made you ..
Innocent? Not anymore !! ''
I like your screen name. If
I like your screen name. If I recall correctly, the German poet Novalis (early 19th century) used blue flowers as quite a powerful symbol.
Starward
really?
If you are right it is amazing !! Im french canadian here blue flower is symbol of pure,innocent person.. in my writing blue flower involve into something bigger, stronger and powerful ! ! Wow your comment blew me off my seat :) thank you !!
nice
A lovely write.
"Deepinyourdreams"
Thank yoouu !! :)
Thank yoouu !! :)
A beautiful write, that
A beautiful write, that brings light, for me so pure, I'm sincere.. Thank you for sharing, enjoyed..
Thank yoouu !! :) i trully
Thank yoouu !! :) i trully appreciate it
thinking of you
well done on these words many people feel this way , im glad u came out on top , may you be blessed from here on forth
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appreciate!
Thank you !! And blessed ahhaa ftw !!
Glad if u liked :)!!
very good poem
This poem is well written. I felt every word and in between. This is either about you or a friend who went through a rough spot in life and made it through on top. I'm very glad to read. Its a wonnderful poem. Thank you for sharing. Can't wait to read more. Can you stop by my poetry page and read some of mine. I have some that sound just like this one and I wanted to know what you thought.
Thank you :) appreciated and
Thank you :) appreciated and sure ill take a look ;)
Blue Flower:
Your poem is an easy, non cluttered poem and well written. However, the reader gains the impression of a secret depth or message within your poem and even if the reader is free to to decide on their own opinion; the poem seems to be written as a special message and shared moments. Lovely write I enjoyed reading.
http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57
Thank you !! Cheerfull :)
Thank you !! Cheerfull :)